August 23, 2004

Remorse

Saraan sat in the ship's deserted cockpit, her shoulders silently shaking with sobs . Tears fell to the floor, forming a rather large wet stain on the carpeting . She had never felt so sad or ashamed in her entire life . Torture was something a Sith did, not Jedi . And when she looked at the prisoner, writhing in pain from their latest drug or torture, she couldn't help but feel a sense of wrong . In the back of her head, the more rational part of her argued that if this was Dart's killer, she would have confessed by now, to avoid the pain and suffering , while her other side, the side that was still very much angry over Dart's death and the destruction of his memory crystal, argued that the prisoner was Sith and was just being stubbornm afterall she did have a red lightsaber .Saraan stood, her back screaming at her in cramps, and stretched before walking toward the prisoner's cell . As she reached the hall before the cell , she stopped and composed herself , not wanting to appear weak to the captive . Stepping around the corner, Saraan realized it had been a futile gesture, for the alien girl lay against the wall, still held up by the chains and unconsious . Her head rolled back and forth and she moaned in pain at frequent intervals . Saraan saw the burn marks left by the force-whip she had used earlier and flinched in shame . Walking over to the med-cabinet , near the door, she lifted out a universal pain-killer, guaranteed to be non-toxic to most species . Saraan filled a hypo-spray and opened the cell's force-field door .Kneeling beside the blue-skinned girl, Saraan held the hypo-spray against her neck . When she didn't feel a warning tinge from the Force, Saraan pressed the trigger and released the medicine into the captive's bloodstream, chasing away the agony .As she stood, the alien girls eyes opened, gazing at Saraan in a blank stare, seemingly not recognizing her , then her eyes closed again . Saraan slowly walked out of the room . As she left, Saraan heard the ear-splitting screech that Kyp had turned on to keep the prisoner from sleeping .

Posted by Nate at August 23, 2004 11:00 AM
Comments

Please no one change this . I am trying to save Saraan from the Dark side .

Posted by: Nate at August 23, 2004 12:58 PM

Hey guys, I've been like totally gone, on a trip. For like A LONG TIME, you guys of posted like a whole ton. This is so fun oh yeah, and Nate, how do I liike join this totally cool story?

Posted by: Vikki at August 23, 2004 07:01 PM

Umm, you come up with a character or take over one that hasn't been used in a long time ( with creators permission of course ) . The website is thedaysman.com/cgi_bin/mt.cgi . Password is , well come up with a character name and I'll enter that as a posting name and get a password for you .

Posted by: Nate at August 23, 2004 08:54 PM

Oh, and everybody involved in the story has to vote, just to be fair .

Posted by: Nate at August 23, 2004 08:58 PM

Uh nate that noise had another purpose

Posted by: Jarlath at August 24, 2004 12:31 AM

Also I have no problem with Vicki joining as long as the ban on romance remains in place

Posted by: Jarlath at August 24, 2004 11:16 AM

Oh, ok about the noise . And yes no romance .

Posted by: Nate at August 24, 2004 01:06 PM

Also Vikki, We need to know your e-mail address and do you have Yahoo IM ? If so, we need your screenname .

Posted by: Nate at August 24, 2004 03:15 PM

I'm totally sorry, I've like got no yahoo IM or e-mail, I'll like, try to get it soon if my totally strict mother will let me! oh, and I so agree with the like, voting thing. I'll try to like keep my romantic side down. If I really totally must.

Posted by: Vikki at August 25, 2004 08:54 PM

Yes please control the romantics, but as long as that stays to a minimum I don't mind if Vikki joins.

Posted by: Tien at August 30, 2004 04:58 PM

That makes 4 out of 5, meaning Vikki is in unless FA has some major objections.

The only condition being the romance ban remains as strong as ever.

Looking forwar to seeing your stuff Vikki

Posted by: Jarlath at August 30, 2004 05:32 PM

I have no objections whatsoever...the more the merrier...

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